Story Rewrite: I would give myself a 4 because I tried really hard to improve my original plot line. My original plot was quite boring and did not have much detail. After much revision, I have improved the plot into a much more interesting story.
Character Illustration: I would give myself a 4 because I drew all my characters using a computer mouse rather than using pre-made shapes. This way, I got to customize the characters the way we imagined them. I also used color in my animation to reflect the ideas we had when conjuring the characters up from our imaginations.
Title: I would give myself a 4 for the title "Illuminati". I feel that this accurately outlines the plot in which we have the Illuminati as the main antagonist. We chose this title because it is simple, yet effective.
Credits: I would give myself a 4 for the credits because the credits showed who did the work.
Text: I would give myself a 4 for the text because I used uniform text for all speech bubbles in order to make reading the text easier and smoother for the audience.
Color: I would give myself a 4 for color because I used color in my animation to reflect the ideas we had when conjuring the characters up from our imaginations. Also, I took the time to add in color where appropriate such as the stars in my space background to give a sense of dimension.
Characters: I would give myself a 4 for characters because we took the time to make up our own characters. We used the animation tools in Flash to accurately depict the characters as we imagined them.
Story: I would give myself a 4 for the story because I think the story is quite smooth. The plot is simple yet humorous.
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